( Thanks to Monsoon-Dreams for the Photograph of the old Steps)
He lumbered heavily up the old stone steps, puffing and panting like the old man he was. Why did she ask him to come up here? Only a few more steps to go. Suddenly, there she was -- in her wedding dress! In the dusk she looked as young as the day they were married.
9 comments:
Love what you did with your 55 words! I just want more... but then I guess that's the idea...leave them wanting more.
Good job!
But--I want the "rest of the story." I've no doubt I'm a very "wordy" person!
awww...and so worth it to climb al of those steps...smies. nice 55!
First Time eh?
What a fantastic job!
Excellent 55 My Friend.
I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Brilliant. Like painting a picture in words.
ah - that was worth climbing all the stairs..so romantic!
Oh my. I thought i was at the Church Blog and then read Wanda's "kiss ass" sentence and decided this must be the place.
I like the stone steps. I also like the challenge. And I like your submission for it – about it – and that you entered.
What a nice surprise! Very nice 55 - hope you'll continue to join in the fun!
Welcome to the world of FFF55! That's a great start. Hope you enjoyed it enough to stay with us.
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